The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gave us a comparison between the years 1950, 2007 and 2050 in the
differents
continents where it shows how the Correct your spelling
different
population
has been growing during Use synonyms
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time.
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population
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other years, Africa had the smallest Change preposition
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population
with 17% compared to North Use synonyms
America
which for the same year had 64%.
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population
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the population
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increasing
especially
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, especially
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which case is predominant to Change preposition
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in Africa's and Asia's growth where they had 62% and 66%, Correct your spelling
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america
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oceania
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