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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph represents the
consume
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consumption
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 of fuel in the United
States
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 and the United
Kingdom
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in
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by
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people
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 with different
level
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levels
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 of
income
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, from
poorest
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the poorest
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 to
richest
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the richest
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people
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. In the same period, The United
States
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 and the United
Kingdom
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 have different
trend
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trends
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, in the United
States
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 poorest
people
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spend
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spent
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 more
percent
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per cent
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 of
his
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their
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income
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in
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on
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 fuel
with
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at
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a
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apply
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50%,
while
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 in the United
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Kingdom
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Kingdom,
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 the poorest
pleople
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people
prefers
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prefer
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 to
expend
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spend
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his
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their
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income
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in
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on
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 other things
,
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apply
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 because they spend less than 10% of his
income
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.
This
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 performance is because
the
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of the
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 size of the country, clearly, The United
States
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 is
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higher
higuer
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higher
 than The United
Kingdom
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 and the poor
people
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 can not live in the principal cities
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, the
people
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 of middle-
income
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, spend the same percentage of fuel in both countries,
it
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which
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 means that both countries are affected by economic factors, policy changes and global oil prices. In
conclution
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conclusion
, both regions have been affected by the same factors
such
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 as policy changes and global oil prices,
in
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addition
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addition,
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 the real difference is presented with the poorest
people
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, who have to spend more
percent
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per cent
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 of
his
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their
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income
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for covering
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to cover
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 the distances between
her
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their
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 houses and the principal cities.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words states, kingdom, people, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fuel expenditure
  • trend analysis
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • seasonal variations
  • fluctuations
  • peak spending
  • global oil prices
  • fuel efficiency
  • economic growth
  • graph interpretation
  • comparative analysis
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