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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
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The chart displays the
attendance
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 percentage of students attending four secondary school types from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
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, apart from the community
schools
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, other groups showed a declining trend over the ten-year period.
Moreover
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, the
attendance
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 percentage in the community
schools
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 increased by more than double
while
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 it declined significantly in the voluntary-controlled
schools
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.
According to
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 the table, the community
schools
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 were not very popular in 2000 with only 12 %
attendance
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 but there was a steep incline up to 32% in 2005 and in 2009 the figure reached more than double i.e. 58%.
Consequently
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, in 2000, the voluntary controlled
schools
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 were the most popular amongst the four other
schools
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 with about 52% of
attendance
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;
however
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, it kept gradually declining in 2005 & 2009 with 38% and 20% respectively.
While
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 the grammar
schools
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' noted 24%
attendance
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 in 2000, the percentage declined to almost half by 2009. Simultaneously, the specialist
schools
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'
attendance
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also
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 showed a downward trend but was insignificant as compared to
other
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the other
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 two
schools
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 because in 2000 the
attendance
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 was 12% and by 2009 it went down by only 2%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words attendance, schools with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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