The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities

and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates information about the sharing type of variety of income teams , namely low, lower
middle
,
middle
, and high groups in cities and regional places in Australia.
Overall
, it is noticeable that in the city,the highest proportion is contributed by the
middle
and the lowest is the low ground.
While
there is a significant increase by a lower
middle
group
in regional centres and a downward trend shows a high team. In the cities,the
middle
group
, between $70,000-$120,000
makeup
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exactly 35% of the population.
Secondly
,
lower
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the lower
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middle
group
accounts for 30%.
Moreover
, $ 120,000 or more dollar recorded by the high
group
.It is 20% and the small proportion of the low
group
below
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15%.
On the other hand
, regional centres compress gradually upward trend by a lower
middle
group
.It is approximately 34% .The lower
middle
group
go down by nearly 8% and the high
group
also
by 15%.There is considerable change present in a low
group
.It is contributed by over a quarter of the Australian population.
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