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The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates information about the sharing type of variety of income teams , namely low, lower
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 ,
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, and high groups in cities and regional places in Australia.
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, it is noticeable that in the city,the highest proportion is contributed by the
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 and the lowest is the low ground.
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 there is a significant increase by a lower
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group
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 in regional centres and a downward trend shows a high team. In the cities,the
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group
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, between $70,000-$120,000
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 exactly 35% of the population.
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,
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the lower
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middle
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group
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 accounts for 30%.
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, $ 120,000 or more dollar recorded by the high
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.It is 20% and the small proportion of the low
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below
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 15%.
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, regional centres compress gradually upward trend by a lower
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group
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.It is approximately 34% .The lower
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group
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 go down by nearly 8% and the high
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also
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 by 15%.There is considerable change present in a low
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.It is contributed by over a quarter of the Australian population.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words middle, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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