The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities

and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates data based on different
income
groups in various urban and rural
areas
of Australia.
Overall
, there is a huge gap between the
middle
and the
low
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income
earners in the city
areas
per year.
Similarly
, the same trend is witnessed in the regional
areas
among those with lower
middle
and high
income
annually. In terms of low and lower
middle
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middle-income
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income
earners, Regional
areas
have the highest figures of people in the lower
middle
class at 34% per annum.
However
,
the
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city dwellers are reported to earn approximately 13%, which is almost triple the number of
the
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rural counterparts. Looking specifically at those in the
middle
and high category of
income
, urban regions outnumber the rural
areas
by more than double the figure, making it 35% of the total
earning
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earnings
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all year round in comparison to a mere 15% of individuals working in regionals. Interestingly,
middle salaried
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people are the most popular in urban
areas
followed closely by those in the lower
middle
category of regional centres.
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