The two graphs show the average hours of daily sunshine and temperature throughout the year in two cities in Australia.
The charts illustrate how the average
hours
of sunshine
and temperature
change over one year in different Australian cities namely, Melbourne
and Darwin
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the rate of temperature
in Melbourne
is the highest in August, with Darwin’s
remaining unchanged over the year. Regarding the average hours
of sunshine
, in both cities, the indicators remain approximately at the same level.
Moving to a detailed analysis, in January the average temperature
in Darwin
is higher than in Melbourne
, representing 18 C
and 6 C
. Over the next six months, the figure for Melbourne
experiences an upward trend and reaches pique in July, with 18 C
. Similarly
, there is an increasing tendency in temperature
rates in Darwin
from January to August, peaking at 30 C
. From August to December, Darwin’s
declines to 21 C
, with Melbourne
’s seeing a decrease of 6 C
at the end
of the year.
Turning to average hours
of sunshine
, the durations in Melbourne
and Darwin
indicate 10 hours
and 6 hours
respectively. In March, the gap between figures narrows, accounting for 8 hours
. Between June and September, times level off, with Darwin’s
being approximately 12 hours
and Melbourne
’s being exactly 6 hours
. Between November and December, the average hours
of sunshine
in both cities are equal again, at under 8 hours
, before that of Melbourne
returns to the same level and Darwin’s
decline to 8 hours
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