The graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides data on the amount of gold sold in Dubai in 2002 based on their national currency, Dirham.
Overall
, the number of sales has been on a decline with sudden fluctuations appearing but managing to become stable by the end of the year. Starting the year on
January with around 200 million and growing even more in the next couple of months, hitting an Change preposition
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peak in March, impressively, selling approximately 350 million. Add a hyphen
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However
, the figure gradually decreased in the next 4 months, hitting its lowest on
July, with just above 100 million, almost triple times lower than its Change preposition
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record. Add a hyphen
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Although
, the figure jumped once again and doubled in August, but
it was only temporary and once again, fell to the previous month's number Remove the conjunction
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September. Still, steadily rising in the Change preposition
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of 3 months between October and December, and it is expected to climb up on the chart.Replace the word
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