The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949 to 2008.

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The line graph highlights data about how much renewable energy was consumed in the USA, over a 59-year period from 1949 to 2008.

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, it is clearly seen that all kinds of renewable energy witnessed a significant increase. Looking into detail, as regards

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and hydroelectric power consumption, they went in a similar direction until 2000. The former started at 3.6

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which doubled the latter at the beginning of the period. Regarding the former and latter, they rose substantially from 2.4 to 7 and 1.8 to 2

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respectively, despite some fluctuations over the period in question. As for wood, it remained relatively constant until 1975, accounting for 1.6

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, after which it experienced negligible growth until 1989, reaching its peak (2.5

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). If we look at biofuels and wind, there was little difference between the number of biofuels and wind, as the former made up 1.4

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the latter was lower by a margin of 0.3

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in 2009.

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The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949 to 2008.

Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some contries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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