Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from city centers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Traffic
cogestions
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congestion
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has made urban
areas
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polluted and not suitable for living and working, there is a
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belief

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that has mentioned private
cars
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have to be eliminated from
city
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areas
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. I think
this
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believe
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cannot be helpful because a major
number
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of big cities do not have enough foundation for
carring
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carrying
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a
larg
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number of
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apply

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populatiuon
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population

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and it might cause
sevreal
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several

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problems
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for citizens.
To begin
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with,
cars
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have brought several
advantageous
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,
such
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as fast commuting and convenient
transporting
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, and
this
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method has made
bond
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a bond

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to the
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population
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population's

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lives and it is hard to imagine a life without
cars
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. Some assume that
cuting
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cutting

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down
access
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the access

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of
cars
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to
city
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centers
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centres

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may solve some
congestions
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congestion

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,
although
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, a significant
number
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of urban
areas
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do not have suitable
infastractuer
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infrastructure

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for transporting all the
population
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and eliminating
cars
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from roads will
brimg
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bring

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other issues.
For instance
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,
rasht
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,
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city
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that
i
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I

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live in, the
governments
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government

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replaced roads
by
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with

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walking ways for citizens
and
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apply

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this
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method
made
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caused

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several traffic
problems
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and caused long hours
traffic
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of traffic

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congestions
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congestion

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for
poeple
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people

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and it increased emissions and
pollutions
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pollution

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.
Furthermore
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, for those who
living
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around
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central
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they need to be able to have access to their needs or for urgent needs , like sickness , and banning them from using their own
cars
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will make their lives more
complecated
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complicated

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and they have to pay a significant amount of money for taxis.
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, nowadays the amount of money we have to pay for
taxi
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a taxi
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is around 2
dollors
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dollars

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per KM
whereas
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by our own
vehicle
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it will cost much lower. On
teh
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the

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other hand
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another hand
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, providing
cleacn
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clear

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town
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towns

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need some acts and banning
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it
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might be effective if all features and
occurrances
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occurrences

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be predicted and the authorities should provide a
reasonablu
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reasonable
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transportation system for the
population
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,
however
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, in most of the cities these options have not been provided and
this
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programm
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will be a big issue. in
conclusiom
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conclusion

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, there is a
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belief

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that consider
eliminaiting
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eliminating

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cars
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from roads will solve all
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the city
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city
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problems
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,
however
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, in my opinion,
this
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happening need a large
number
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of equipment and
considaration
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consideration

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also
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if some habitats might face
with
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several
problems
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and make the
population
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lives more
complecated
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complicated

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Examples
Include a wider range of relevant and specific examples to support your main points. This strengthens your argument and makes it more convincing.
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Review grammar and spelling to ensure your message is clearly understood. Frequent errors can distract from the strength of your argument.
Task Response
Be sure to fully address the question posed, making your position clear and discussing relevant arguments for and/or against the statement.
Understanding
You presented a perspective that acknowledges the complexity of completely banning cars from city centers, showing an understanding of the topic.
Example
You provided a personal example with your city, which helps to ground your argument in real-life experience.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emissions
  • Air pollution
  • Global warming
  • Noise pollution
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Public transportation
  • Green spaces
  • Urban residents
  • Enforcing the ban
  • Exceptions
  • Mental well-being
  • Healthier lifestyles
  • Local businesses
  • Tourism
  • Offset the need
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