The charts bellow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The
charts
illustrate the percentage of the usage of water for three
types of purposes in North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
.
Overall
, most percentage of water was used for agriculture by South America
, Africa , Central Asia
and South East Asia
. Percentages between forty eight
and Add a hyphen
forty-eight
fifty
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fifty-three
three
of water was consumed for industry. Domestic use
was over ten percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
first
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the first
three
charts
and it was less than ten percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
last
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the last
three
charts
.
According to
first
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the first
three
charts
, domestic use
was not as much as agricultural use
. Industrial use
in North America
and Europe were
approximately Correct subject-verb agreement
was
same
. Domestic uses in Correct article usage
the same
first
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the first
three
charts
are close to each other. According to
last
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the last
three
charts
, other
two Correct article usage
the other
use
were not as popular as agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
uses
use
and domestic uses in Central Asia
and South East Asia
are exactly same
. Industrial Correct article usage
the same
use
was the least in Central Asia
even though it was more than domestic use
in South East
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Southeast
Asia
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