You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter - thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience - explain what you hope to learn from the work experience - ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to thank you for your kind that you accept me to do this
work experience. I am excited and wait until that day.
As a trainee, there are many things that I hope to learn about working at Human
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the Human
Resource
Department for three months. For Fix the agreement mistake
Resources
instant
, How can I prepare Replace the word
instance
about
Change preposition
for
recruitment
process Correct article usage
the recruitment
such
as interviewing candidates.
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?
And how
can I learn about Correct word choice
How
Orientation
Program for all new staffCorrect article usage
the Orientation
.
I hope that I can have work experience in a few months.
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Threre
are some questions about Correct your spelling
There
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the frist
frist
day at Correct your spelling
first
workplace
. Do I need to bring something on my first day? Add an article
the workplace
Such
as,
food for lunch and coffee. Is there Remove the comma
apply
the
cafe near the companyCorrect article usage
a
.
I would appreciate it if you could answer these questions.
I look forward to seeing you in person.
Yours faithfully,
Miss Sana LeeChange the punctuation
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Spelling/Grammar
Be sure to proofread your letter to correct minor spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity.
Task Response Detail
Consider being more specific in what you hope to learn, to make your expectations and learning goals clearer.
Structure for Questions
You can clarify your questions by separating them into bullet points or individual paragraphs for better readability.
Writing Tone
Your polite tone and gratitude towards the opportunity are well expressed, which is appropriate for such letters.
Letter Structure
You effectively structured the letter with a greeting, body, and closing, making it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite