The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates how many
cars
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were owned by
people
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in Britain between 1971 and 2007.
Overall
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,
people
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who owned no
car
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in the beginning were the dominant type but in the end, most
people
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had
one
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car
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.
In contrast
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, three or more
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cars type
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car types
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reported the least interest humans showed. In 1971,
people
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which
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who
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had no
car
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topped the year at almost 50%
while
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people
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had
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who had
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one
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car
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was the second highest in the same year. In the following year, there was a clash in the figure at 50% in 1975. The
people
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who owned
one
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car
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witnessed variations before hitting the top of the chart at 43 % by 2007.
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, no
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started to decline and stopped in 2007 at 25%.
Furthermore
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, the proportion of two
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started to rise until 1974,
then
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remained stable for around two years and continued to grow in an upward direction and came to an end by reaching the point where no
car
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ended. And the
last
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one
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is the three or more
cars
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people
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had, it started with a stable trend and ended at 6% in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, people, car, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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