The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps demonstrate how
a
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village of Stokeford transformed over
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80-year period from 1930 to 2010. By and large,
it is clear that
the area underwent significant transformations with the most noticeable changes being the conversion of farmlands into various new facilities to cater for residents’ needs. In 1930, the farmland accounted for the majority of the
north east
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of the map.
However
, until 2010, the farmland was destroyed and replaced by primary
school
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schools
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and
houses
.
Therefore
, the former was expanded from the first
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building to three buildings, and the latter was extended from 1 row of
houses
to 2 rows of
houses
with 1 path between 2 rows.
Besides
, to the north of the post office, the shops were demolished
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to make way for 2 rows of
houses
with 9
houses
from 1 row of
houses
with 3
houses
before
while
the post office remained the same. As regards the
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southern
area, a lot of
houses
were built on the original site of the farmland located to the east of the river Stoke in 1930. To the
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south-east
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south east
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southeast
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of the map, the garden was knocked down and the large house was widened into
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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