The graph shows the number of girls and boys playing sport in an English town in 2012
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
boys
and girls
who participated in six different types of sports activities, including tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, football
and hockey
, in one of the English towns during 2022.
In total, there were more boys
playing sports compared with girls
, with a total of 230 boys
and 173 girls
. All tennis, cycling, football
and hockey
had a larger number of boy participants, while
football
shows a larger difference as boys
outweigh girls
with a number of 30. Opposite, there were more female participants in both
badminton and swimming, both
of them were 10 people higher than the boys
.
Among all games, boys
have shown a higher interest in football
, while
most girls
preferred swimming, in which the percentage of participation is 21.7% and 28.9% of the population respectively. Both
boys
and girls
had the least interest in hockey
, only 15 boys
and 10 girls
were playing with it.
Overall
, there are more guy
doing sports than Fix the agreement mistake
guys
girls
in English towns in 2022, while
more boys
show a preference for soccer while
more Correct word choice
apply
girls
enjoy swimming. At the same time, both
groups have lower motivation to play hockey
.Submitted by asllchkied on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, football, hockey, both with synonyms.
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