The graph shows the number of girls and boys playing sport in an English town in 2012
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
who participated in six different types of sports activities, including tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, Use synonyms
football
and Use synonyms
hockey
, in one of the English towns during 2022.
In total, there were more Use synonyms
boys
playing sports compared with Use synonyms
girls
, with a total of 230 Use synonyms
boys
and 173 Use synonyms
girls
. All tennis, cycling, Use synonyms
football
and Use synonyms
hockey
had a larger number of boy participants, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
football
shows a larger difference as Use synonyms
boys
outweigh Use synonyms
girls
with a number of 30. Opposite, there were more female participants in Use synonyms
both
badminton and swimming, Use synonyms
both
of them were 10 people higher than the Use synonyms
boys
.
Among all games, Use synonyms
boys
have shown a higher interest in Use synonyms
football
, Use synonyms
while
most Linking Words
girls
preferred swimming, in which the percentage of participation is 21.7% and 28.9% of the population respectively. Use synonyms
Both
Use synonyms
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
had the least interest in Use synonyms
hockey
, only 15 Use synonyms
boys
and 10 Use synonyms
girls
were playing with it.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are more Linking Words
guy
doing sports than Fix the agreement mistake
guys
girls
in English towns in 2022, Use synonyms
while
more Linking Words
boys
show a preference for soccer Use synonyms
Linking Words
while
more Correct word choice
apply
girls
enjoy swimming. At the same time, Use synonyms
both
groups have lower motivation to play Use synonyms
hockey
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, football, hockey, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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