The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates
average
weekly spending of families in one country in 2 different years.
Correct article usage
the average
Overall
, it can be observed that families spent the largest part of their income for
food in 1968 and after 50 years it changed to leisure. People spent a small amount of money on fuel and power in 1968 and it was almost stable after years.Change preposition
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