The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.

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The provided maps illustrate alterations in the rural area of Meadowside and the urban centre of

Fonton

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from 1962 to now.

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, during the period the township and the town have been expanded and from 1985, a

road

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has been constructed to connect these two places and some facilities like a superstore and a leisure complex have been added. In 1962, Meadowside was been small

village

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that had no facilities and no connection with

Fonton

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and just a narrow

road

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existed. The most changes in the

village

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occurred in 1985, a

road

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was built in order to connect the town and the

village

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also

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, the existing

road

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was developed. Various places were added to the

village

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in 1985 including a leisure complex and housing estate which have been located above the

road

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and the superstore which has been located opposite side of the housing estate. The

village

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has been redeveloped and converted to suburbs by making a unit area with

Fonton

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. Between

Fonton

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and the Meadowside suburbs, some facilities have been introduced including a hotel and station which are above the main

road

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that connects these areas and the business park which is across the station.

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, a railroad has been erected from

Fonton

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to the

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The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.

Some people feel that children should be able to choose the subjects they are interested in while others feel they should study the basic require subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some pople think that students should learn main subjects only. To what extent do you agree?

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An increasing number of professionals such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?