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The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now.
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The provided maps illustrate alterations in the rural area of Meadowside and the urban centre of
Fonton
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 from 1962 to now.
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, during the period the township and the town have been expanded and from 1985, a
road
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 has been constructed to connect these two places and some facilities like a superstore and a leisure complex have been added. In 1962, Meadowside was been small
village
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 that had no facilities and no connection with
Fonton
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 and just a narrow
road
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 existed. The most changes in the
village
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 occurred in 1985, a
road
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 was built in order to connect the town and the
village
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,
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, the existing
road
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 was developed. Various places were added to the
village
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 in 1985 including a leisure complex and housing estate which have been located above the
road
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 and the superstore which has been located opposite side of the housing estate. The
village
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 has been redeveloped and converted to suburbs by making a unit area with
Fonton
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. Between
Fonton
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 and the Meadowside suburbs, some facilities have been introduced including a hotel and station which are above the main
road
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 that connects these areas and the business park which is across the station.
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, a railroad has been erected from
Fonton
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 to the

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fonton, road, village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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