The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the amount of five different industries'( finance, food processing, manufacturing, Change the verb form
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tourism
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Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with apredication for the year 2029. Correct article usage
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Overall
, food processing , fossil fuels, toursim
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tourism
indistries
are expected to decrease in the future and finance is the only industry that has a prediction to increase in the future.
In 2009 , finance industries in Brazil Correct your spelling
industries
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expectation
to fall down to slightly more than 25% in 2019.
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On the other hand
, Food processing producation
showed only 10% in 2009 and is expected to remain at the same level after 20 years Correct your spelling
production
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doubled in 2019 to become more than 20%. Unnecessary verb
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dramatically
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