The graph and table below show average monthly temperatures and average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The line graph illustrates information about monthly heating proportion and table despite the numerical of hours of sunrise per year in main states in three different countries,namely the United Kingdom,U.S.A ,and Australia.
Overall
, beging of the year a significant percentage was represented by Sydney and end of the year also
it remained the same.while
New York and London cities fluctuated and decided in the last
month.
According to
the graph, in the month of January around 25 temperature
.Remain the same in the first three months and gradually dropped and hit the lowest temperature
of nearly 15.Middle of July again slightly went up and stabilized in 25 heat.
Moreover
, London and Sydney both cities show under 15 proportions of temperature
between January and March.It was a moderate climb and New York accounted for the highest heat contribution in July of exactly 30.After July slowly dipped and end of the month there was recorded approximately just below 10 temperature
.
Furthermore
,New York was made up of the most sunshine city
yearly and the lowest was London .Those were 2535 and 1180 respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
cities
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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