The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagram depicts the process, which is about how a hydroelectric
power
station produces electricity.
Overall
, there are distinctive stages of this
process during the day
and night
. It starts with the water
from the river, which is in a high-level reservoir
. The water
will eventually find its way and go to the power
station to light up the national grid.
First,
the water
from the river is reserved in a high-level reservoir
. Second,
we can see a dam which is opened during the day
and closed at night
. Throughout the day
, after being flown, electricity is generated by water
, while
at night
, water
is flown through pumping. Third,
the generator is operated by reversible turbines in the power
station. Finally
, the power
produced by the generator will power
the national grid through power
lines. Throughout the night
, after being pumped by reversible turbines, the water
goes into a high-level reservoir
, while
during the day
it goes into a low-level reservoir
.Submitted by abbasisarina340 on
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