The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagram depicts the process, which is about how a hydroelectric
power
station produces electricity.
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Overall
, there are distinctive stages of Linking Words
this
process during the Linking Words
day
and Use synonyms
night
. It starts with the Use synonyms
water
from the river, which is in a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
. The Use synonyms
water
will eventually find its way and go to the Use synonyms
power
station to light up the national grid.
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First,
the Linking Words
water
from the river is reserved in a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
. Use synonyms
Second,
we can see a dam which is opened during the Linking Words
day
and closed at Use synonyms
night
. Throughout the Use synonyms
day
, after being flown, electricity is generated by Use synonyms
water
, Use synonyms
while
at Linking Words
night
, Use synonyms
water
is flown through pumping. Use synonyms
Third,
the generator is operated by reversible turbines in the Linking Words
power
station. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
power
produced by the generator will Use synonyms
power
the national grid through Use synonyms
power
lines. Throughout the Use synonyms
night
, after being pumped by reversible turbines, the Use synonyms
water
goes into a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
, Use synonyms
while
during the Linking Words
day
it goes into a low-level Use synonyms
reservoir
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, day, night, water, reservoir with synonyms.
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