In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, there are more and more students

go

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to

university

to find higher

knowledges

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and more work opportunities. Some of them choose to go to a nearby

university

while

still living with their family.

However

, some decide to attend

university

far away from their

home

. In my opinion, studying away from

home

give

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students more benefits. And in

this

essay, I will provide reasons about why I believe that students should

studying

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away from

home

and my own examples. First of all, I see that the two largest disadvantages when studying far from

home

is

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people having less

time

with their family and getting homesick. When someone

spending

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less

time

with their family,

as a consequence

, they

lost

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connections with their family members and relatives. For

an

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example, when my older

cousins

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finished her high school diploma, she decided to go to a

university

in a more developed city in Canada. Soon, she

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less

time

talking with her dad,

which

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is my uncle, and

also

less meeting with her

friends

. She

also

told me that she missed things in our hometown, especially the food and the cuisine.

On the other hand

, living far from

home

can help them meet new people

and

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get more

friends

and even try new things that they probably

has

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never seen before.

This

mean

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they will

get

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different concerns and a more diverse background. To

examplify

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exemplify

, I have gone to Saigon, a

nearby

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city

from

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my

home

to study high school. At

first,

it takes

time

to make new

friends

and create new habits.

Although

it's pretty harsh at

first,

I soon blend into the new environment and learn new things. As a

results

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, I got beautiful memories, new best

friends

and

also

widen

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my eyes.

To conclude

, I prefer learning far from

home

because I can make new relationships and different

view

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about that place.