The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The pie charts display data about the production of energy from various resources in an unnamed nation.
Overall
, oil is considered the most produced form of power in the 2 years.Linking Words
while
hydrogen is stable in the two periods of time.
In detail oil represents 52%which is considered the highest form of energy production in 1985.Linking Words
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it fell Linking Words
down
by Change preposition
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13%in
2003 and Correct your spelling
13% in
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was the highest use .Linking Words
In addition
, natural gas decreased by relative amount in the 2 periods.
the hydrogen showing a steady rank between the two years.Meanwhile, the use of nuclear power and other renewable energy decreased from 22%to17% and 4%to1% respectively in 1985 and 2003Linking Words
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