The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.

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the numbers and

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percentages respectively of

same day

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and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the five Australian states. We can clearly see from the table that

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amount of stays are taken by the public hospitals in all states and New South Wales is a major one. The pie

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shows that private overnights are the smallest one

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to others. The table

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that

two third

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of all the stays have two states, which is New South Wales and Victoria with

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stays of fifteen thousand. Only a small proportion of stays in the country is taken by South Australia with 2200 and Western Australia has

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more with 2552. The pie

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represents four causes, with private overnight representing the smallest proportion at just more

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one

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. Public overnight and Public same day constitute

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of all the

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with equally thirty per cent each.