The table below shows the numbers of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in 5 Australian states for last year. The pie chart below shows percentages of same day and overnight stays in public and private hospitals in the same 5 Australian states.
The provided table gives information about how many
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same-day
day
and overnight stays in public and private hospitals
in 5 Australian states for last
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the last
Queenland
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Queensland
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and South Australia
. The pie chart indicates the number
of percentages of same day
and overnight stays in the same 5 Australian states.
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hospitals
, whereas
the lowest indicator of people
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in private
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last
year New South Wales had the highest number
of people
with 6097. A significant number
of patients were in Victoria and Queensland(4607 and 3128 respectively). In other parts of Australia
, namely Western Australia
and South Australia
, there were fewer patients compared to the others and they all together accounted for about 3000.
With regard to private ones, people
who had health problems flocked mostly to New South Wales, Victoria and Queensland(about 2100 for each of them).Personal healthcare services in other areas had the lowest number
of individuals with 829 and 617 respectively.
As for the pie chart,the largest proportion of patients were in public healthcare services both overnight and same-day
stays(around one-third).Meanwhile,the figures for private same day
and private overnight were the least and together were responsible for 40%.Submitted by dnm.best on
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