The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the average
price
changes of Copper
, Nickel
, and Zinc
for 12 months in 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that expect Zinc
all two metal sources' average prices decreased over a year in 2014, and Nickel
experienced a drastic decline among those two other sources.
First of all, in January the Nickel
had the highest price
in comparison to Copper
and Zinc
, with 6% in average price
and it saw a dramatic 5% drop in price
by March. In the next 2 months, it had a plateau movement, then
it was faced with another 4% decrease by Jun which was the lowest amount among those others. However
, After growth in the next month, its price
was at the same level for three months then
with a skyrocket surge the Nickel
reached its level in December where it was the same In April, about 1% which was the lowest amount in comparison to Copper
and Zinc
.
Second of all, although
Zinc
in January had the lowest price
at 1%, at the end
of the year it reached to peak of 2% in total. Also
, Zinc
from February to June experienced a gradual 4% decline and after a minor growth in July, it levelled off in October. From October to December Zinc
saw a dramatic rise and reached 2% in price
. Also
, Copper
after a fluctuating movement between -1% to 1% from February to November, reached about 1.5% in total.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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