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The line graph below shows changes in fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990.

The line graph below shows changes in fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990.
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The diagram below illustrates how the way the crowds consumed fast food changed in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
Firstly
, when it comes to Hamburger, in the beginning, it started
in
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 the lowest point,
then
, the
consumers
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had been ascending
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 gradually during
5
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years mentioned,
in addition
, in the early, the line was rising little by little until 1985, after the session, it increased drastically from 100 to 200 pieces.
Secondly
, Fish & Chips sales seemed to be
dissapointing
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disappointing
 as same as
Hamburger
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Hamburgers
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 in 1970, but the number of eaters
were surging
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 in the later period, the cuisine
was
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bought
upto
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up to
 300 pieces in 1985 and reached
its
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500 in
the
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5 years later. Ultimately, Pizza was at
the
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 satisfying location before 1970,
nevertheless
, individuals started shrugging
the
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meal
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meals
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 off owing to the
arrivals
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arrival
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 of 2 dishes raised before at that time, the
salers
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sales
sailors
 had to undergo
the
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 contraction, in parallel, in 1985, the business expanded again and still continues in
this
 day and age.
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