the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart gives information about how much of the percentage of individuals who decided to
drink
various types of Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in five cities in Australia in the Use synonyms
last
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four
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weeks
.
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Firstly
, the chart shows a considerable percentage of Linking Words
people
who Use synonyms
drink
Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in a café in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
four
Use synonyms
weeks
. Significant lovers of Use synonyms
coffee
in Use synonyms
café
s live in Melbourne, approximately 64 per cent of Use synonyms
citizens
. Next are the Use synonyms
people
of Hobart, where 63 per cent of individuals Use synonyms
drink
Use synonyms
coffee
in the café. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
citizens
of Sydney decided to Use synonyms
drink
Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in a café, and more than Use synonyms
half
of the Use synonyms
citizens
fan drinking Use synonyms
tea
or Use synonyms
coffee
in a café. Only in Adelaide fewer than Use synonyms
half
of the Use synonyms
people
decided to Use synonyms
drink
Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in a café.
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Secondly
, the chart shows the number of Linking Words
people
who have had fresh or instant Use synonyms
coffee
in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
four
Use synonyms
weeks
. More than Use synonyms
half
of the Use synonyms
citizens
of Hobart and Brisbane decided to buy instant Use synonyms
coffee
in the previous Use synonyms
four
Use synonyms
weeks
, Use synonyms
whereas
less than Linking Words
half
of Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney chose to buy instant Use synonyms
coffee
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
citizens
of Sydney and Melbourne bought fresh Use synonyms
coffee
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nearly
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in nearly
half
of individuals in the Use synonyms
last
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four
Use synonyms
weeks
, and the other three city Use synonyms
citizens
decided to have fresh Use synonyms
coffee
just under a third.
In conclusion, the vast majority percentage of Use synonyms
citizens
in Australia have chosen to go to a café for Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in the Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
four
Use synonyms
weeks
.Use synonyms
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