the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart gives information about how much of the percentage of individuals who decided to
drink
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various types of
coffee
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or
tea
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in five cities in Australia in the
last
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four
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weeks
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.
Firstly
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, the chart shows a considerable percentage of
people
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who
drink
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coffee
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or
tea
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in a café in the
last
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four
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weeks
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. Significant lovers of
coffee
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in
café
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s live in Melbourne, approximately 64 per cent of
citizens
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. Next are the
people
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of Hobart, where 63 per cent of individuals
drink
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coffee
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in the café.
Then
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, the
citizens
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of Sydney decided to
drink
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coffee
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or
tea
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in a café, and more than
half
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of the
citizens
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fan drinking
tea
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or
coffee
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in a café. Only in Adelaide fewer than
half
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of the
people
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decided to
drink
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coffee
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or
tea
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in a café.
Secondly
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, the chart shows the number of
people
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who have had fresh or instant
coffee
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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. More than
half
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of the
citizens
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of Hobart and Brisbane decided to buy instant
coffee
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in the previous
four
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weeks
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,
whereas
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less than
half
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of Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney chose to buy instant
coffee
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.
However
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,
citizens
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of Sydney and Melbourne bought fresh
coffee
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nearly
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in nearly
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half
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of individuals in the
last
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four
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weeks
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, and the other three city
citizens
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decided to have fresh
coffee
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just under a third. In conclusion, the vast majority percentage of
citizens
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in Australia have chosen to go to a café for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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four
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weeks
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words drink, coffee, tea, four, weeks, people, café, citizens, half with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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