the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart gives information about how much of the percentage of individuals who decided to
drink
various types of coffee
or tea
in five cities in Australia in the last
four
weeks
.
Firstly
, the chart shows a considerable percentage of people
who drink
coffee
or tea
in a café in the last
four
weeks
. Significant lovers of coffee
in café
s live in Melbourne, approximately 64 per cent of citizens
. Next are the people
of Hobart, where 63 per cent of individuals drink
coffee
in the café. Then
, the citizens
of Sydney decided to drink
coffee
or tea
in a café, and more than half
of the citizens
fan drinking tea
or coffee
in a café. Only in Adelaide fewer than half
of the people
decided to drink
coffee
or tea
in a café.
Secondly
, the chart shows the number of people
who have had fresh or instant coffee
in the last
four
weeks
. More than half
of the citizens
of Hobart and Brisbane decided to buy instant coffee
in the previous four
weeks
, whereas
less than half
of Adelaide, Melbourne, and Sydney chose to buy instant coffee
. However
, citizens
of Sydney and Melbourne bought fresh coffee
nearly
Change preposition
in nearly
half
of individuals in the last
four
weeks
, and the other three city citizens
decided to have fresh coffee
just under a third.
In conclusion, the vast majority percentage of citizens
in Australia have chosen to go to a café for coffee
or tea
in the last
four
weeks
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