The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The polyline graph illustrates the financial position of a New Zealand local authority in millions
from 2012
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shows the estimations till 2022.
Overall
, it is clear that
rates
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of revenue
revenue
and user charges are predicted to increase over the period.
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of revenue
While
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borrowings and grants and subsidies are likely to remain much lower.
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Rates
revenue and user charges increased moderately till 2018 and they are forecasted to follow
the similar pattern over the rest of the time frame. Rates
revenue stood at just under 1.5 billion in
2012, which was the highest of the four criteria. Though it remained stable for a year but
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then
increased gradually until 2018, it is expected to climb to approximately 2.4 billion dollars in 2022.
Like rates
revenues, user charges are predicted to increase continuously. They began the period at
1 billion and are likely to become twice by 2022.Submitted by t.albadaei.ta on
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