The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New

Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant
The polyline graph illustrates the financial position of a New Zealand local authority in millions from 2012
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the present and
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shows the estimations till 2022. 
Overall
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it is clear that
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revenue
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and user charges are predicted to increase over the period.
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borrowings and grants and subsidies are likely to remain much lower. 
Rates
revenue and user charges increased moderately till 2018 and they are forecasted to follow the similar pattern over the rest of the time frame.
Rates
revenue stood at just under 1.5 billion in 2012, which was the highest of the four criteria. Though it remained stable for a year
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increased gradually until 2018, it is expected to climb to approximately 2.4 billion dollars in 2022. Like
rates
revenues, user charges are predicted to increase continuously. They began the period at 1 billion and are likely to become twice by 2022.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the tenth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the tenth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • significant
  • revenue
  • expenditure
  • surpass
  • align
  • trend
  • stability
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • forecast
  • decline
  • rise
  • consistent
  • notable
  • growth
  • factors
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