The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables illustrate Fairtrade's revenue from the sale of labelled
coffee
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and bananas in 1999 and 2004 respectively, the data was collected in the countries of the UK, Switzerland, Denmark,
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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.
Overall
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, over the given period, the
sales
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of bananas in Switzerland had the highest portion among the other countries,
while
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coffee
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sales
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in
Sweden
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accounted for the lowest.
According to
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the first table,
coffee
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sales
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in the United Kingdom topped the list, ranging from 1.5 to 20
million
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euros
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.
In addition
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, the figure for
coffee
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sales
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doubled, starting at the point of 3
million
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euros
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in 1999 and reaching 6
million
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euros
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in 2004.
Additionally
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, the three remaining countries, Denmark,
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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, experienced a slight increase to less than 1
million
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euros
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. The second table showed that in Switzerland, banana
sales
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ranked first with 15 to 47
million
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euros
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, followed by the UK and
Belgium
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. The UK saw an increase from 1 to 5.5
million
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euros
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,
while
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Belgium
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's
sales
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ranged between 0.6 and 4
million
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euros
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.
Moreover
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, a contrasting pattern was seen in
Sweden
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and Denmark, where
sales
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of bananas decreased from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9
million
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euros
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, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, belgium, sweden, sales, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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