The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The following
diagram
illustrates the parts of a neuron and the way it works. It is divided into seven particles that are associated with each other. Each part
posseses
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possesses
it's
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own function. As it might be concluded from the
diagram
Cell body (
also
conventionally known as "soma") is the largest particle. It has some dendrites that have
function
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of gaining information and messages from other cells. The following cellular particle is
Axon
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, which is located inside of Myelin sheath. Axon passes messages away from the cell body to other neurons, muscles, or glands. The
diagram
also
shows the action potential which is an electrical signal that goes down the Axon. All messages go from right to
the
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left.
Finally
, there are some terminal buttons which
has
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a
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goal
to create
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conjunctions between other cells. It
also
has to be mentioned that there are
also
other dendrites from another neuron in the
diagram
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • neuron
  • nervous system
  • dendrites
  • soma
  • cell body
  • nucleus
  • axon
  • electrical impulses
  • myelin sheath
  • axon terminals
  • neurotransmitters
  • synapse
  • signal transmission
  • insulating
  • unmyelinated fibers
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