You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, last year
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The bar chart illustrates the estimated percentage of
literacy
in the world for the last
year by specifying the region
and gender.
Among all regions, South Asia and Arab
States have the highest Correct article usage
the Arab
literacy
rate
in male education with more than 50 percent
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per cent
While
the former region
has the highest percentage in female education as well with more than 30%. Along with
this
, Sub-Saharan
Africa Correct article usage
the Sub-Saharan
region
has around 30% literacy
rate
in female education in the last
year. on the other side, there are only developed countries which have literacy
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a literacy
rate
of less than 5% for both genders in the previous year.
The chart depicts that literacy
Correct article usage
the literacy
rate
is significantly much more
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higher
in
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for
female
in most of the regions Fix the agreement mistake
females
such
as East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia. While
in Latin America and in developed countries, there is a minor difference in literacy
rate
between men and women that reflects gender equality in these
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this region
these regions
region
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