The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts provide information about how
water
is used
in
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6
continent
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for different uses. From the chart, in 4 areas the
water
is used most in
agricultural
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and in 2 regions
most
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the most
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water
used aspect is industrial
use
.
Firstly
, South
America
, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia used more than 70% of
water
in
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Agricultural
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agriculture
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, but Industrial and domestic only used below 10% of
water
except 2 countries. South
America
used 19% of
water
in Domestic and
South East
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Southeast
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Asia used 12% of
water
in industrial
use
.
Secondly
, the 2 countries which
used
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use
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most of their
water
on
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industrial are North
America
and Europe. But these 2 countries used their
water
in
most
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the most
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balanced way. North
America
used 48% of
water
in
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industrial
use
, 39%
in
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Agricultural
use
and 13%
in
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Domestic
use
. Europe’s
water
usage is almost the same as North
America
.
Overall
,
from
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the 6 areas, 4 of the area’s
water
usage is only based on Agricultural
use
. Unlike the 4 areas, the
last
2
regions
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regions'
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usage of
water
is balanced in each aspect.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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