The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

This

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diagram illustrates the steps of producing

sugar

from

sugar

cane

, presented in seven steps.

Overall

, the process of making

sugar

is divided

in

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into

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two stages. The first is growing

sugar

cane

and the latter is manufacturing. All of those stages pass through seven steps,

begin

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beginning

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with cultivating

sugar

cane

and

end

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ending

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with drying and cooling

sugar

. In detail, the initial process is planting the

sugar

cane

and

keep

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them

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growing for 12-18 months.

Then

, the

sugar

cane

are

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is

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ready to be harvested either by farmers or machines.

Moreover

, in the second stage, after being harvested, the

further

step is to load them in the truck and crush them into pieces to form juice by using a crushing machine. The juice that has been produced

need

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to be purified in a filter so that it will transform into clear water. After that, fire the purified juice in an evaporator to form syrup.

Subsequently

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Subsequently,

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the next step is

separating

sugar

crystals from syrup in a centrifuge. Eventually,

sugar

is formed after drying and cooling the crystals.