The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.
The given line chart depicts the portion of citizens present in music shows from different range of age groups from 16 to over 75 in a half
of
decade from 2010 to 2015.
looking from an Change preposition
apply
overall
perspective, it is apparent that despite facing fluctuations for all ages, people aged 16 to 24 are more likely to participate in concerts.
Regarding the youngsters, we can put them in three different age groups such
as 16 to 24 and 25 to 44 together with
45 to 54. It can be seen that the middle group who are 25 to 44 are less interested in concerts than the two other young groups. The proportion of this
middle group was just 40 percent
in 2010 and then
although
it witnessed a gradual fall again it rose to nearly 50 percent
.
The middle-aged who are about 55 to 64 years old have the most steadily decreased line graph from 25 percent
in 2010 to 23 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015.
Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
about the Add a comma
Finally,
elderly
it is obvious that music shows engage Add a comma
elderly,
this
group`s interest less than others which started from 10 percent
and by huge fluctuations it became 20 percent
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