The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar
chart
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illustrates the numbers of employed people with respect to the gender and job category for Australia in the
last
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year.
Overall
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, the bar
chart
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provides data regarding male and female job-holders in seven different types of employment. There are six job categories where males are more dominant than females
while
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the remaining occupations are occupied by majority of the women. The bar
chart
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depicts that more men are working as managers, semi-professionals, tradespeople, production, and labour in comparison to women. There is a significant gender inequality with a difference of 300,000 to 800,000 in managers, tradespeople, and the production sector. As far as the number of employed women is concerned, the
chart
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shows that more females are working in the category of professionals and clerical staff with a margin of 50,000 to 100,000
in contrast
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with men in accordance with the statistics of the
last
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year in Australia.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment figures
  • Sectors
  • Significant disparities
  • Gender balance
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Dominant
  • Inferred
  • Labor market
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Insights
  • Implications
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