The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New

Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents information about local authorities for the past and projected finances in New Zealand.
Overall
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, it can be said that rates revenue and user charges experienced an upward trend over the
period
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while
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the borrowings experienced some fluctuation over the
period
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. It is interesting to notice that the rents revenue had the highest number at the beginning of the
period
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nearly 1480 in 2012
then
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it significantly increased to almost 2480 in 2022 .
Furthermore
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, the number of user changes had increased to 1000 in 2012
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it sharply rose to 2000 in 2022. It can easily seen that the grants and subsidies were the lowest number at the beginning of the
period
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approximately 470
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it slightly grew to 500 in 2015 . After that, it rose to about 700in 2016.
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it has gradually felt until the end of the
period
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • significant
  • revenue
  • expenditure
  • surpass
  • align
  • trend
  • stability
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • forecast
  • decline
  • rise
  • consistent
  • notable
  • growth
  • factors
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