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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. Yell him/her of the incorrect information. Give him/her the correct information. Explain why they should correct it.

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Hello
 Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
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 letter in order to inform
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 knowledge in the book based on
famous
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a famous
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 city
of
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 our country during your
last
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 publication. Yesterday, I visited a public library to search my
course related
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 materials. Suddenly, I found a booklet on the city of
the
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Amritsar that was renowned from
the
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ancient times
over
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 the world.As I am already looking for it because of my history subject
i
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 need some information.But,I was
little
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 bit
confusing
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 when
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goes
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 through it
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 reading because what happened, you published
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 statement about it. As for my concern, the Amritsar sahib has ten
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 places and five
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 hotels but you have written only two religious and ten luxury hotels that portion
shown
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a
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 incorrect
fiqure
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figure
 to those who are new here and
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 on history books.
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, I am approaching
at
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you just to advise on
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 it
according to
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 real perfection. I would appreciate it if you could understand my concern and accept it with
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huge respect. I am looking forward to
hear
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 back from you. Yours faithfully, Preet

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Task Achievement
Consider using a more formal greeting and sign-off to suit the context of writing to an author, for example, 'Dear Sir/Madam,' and 'Sincerely, [Your Name].'
Task Achievement
Review and correct grammatical errors to improve clarity and professionalism in your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific point: incorrect information, correct information, and the importance of correction. This will improve the logical flow and make your letter easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Work on using a consistent tone throughout your letter. While it's important to point out mistakes, ensure your message is polite and respectful.
Task Achievement
You effectively communicated the main purpose of your letter, which is to inform the author of incorrect information in their book.
Task Achievement
Your initiative to provide correct information and explain why corrections are necessary demonstrates a good understanding of the task.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • courteous introduction
  • inaccurate information
  • pinpointing specifics
  • factual data
  • potential misconceptions
  • credibility
  • verifying
  • local expertise
  • respectful request
  • future editions
  • admiration
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