You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. Yell him/her of the incorrect information. Give him/her the correct information. Explain why they should correct it.
Hloo
Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing Correct your spelling
Hello
this
letter in order to inform misprint
knowledge in the book based on Wrong verb form
misprinted
famous
city Correct article usage
a famous
of
our country during your Change preposition
in
last
publication.
Yesterday, I visited a public library to search my course related
materials. Suddenly, I found a booklet on the city of Add a hyphen
course-related
the
Amritsar that was renowned from Correct article usage
apply
the
ancient times Correct article usage
apply
over
the world.As I am already looking for it because of my history subject Rephrase
all over
i
need some information.But,I was Change the capitalization
I
little
bit Add an article
a little
confusing
when Replace the word
confused
i
Change the capitalization
I
goes
through it Wrong verb form
went
while
reading because what happened, you published wrong
statement about it.
As for my concern, the Amritsar sahib has ten Change the article
the wrong
spiritually
places and five Change the word
spiritual
five star
hotels but you have written only two religious and ten luxury hotels that portion Add a hyphen
five-star
shown
Wrong verb form
shows
a
incorrect Change the article
an
fiqure
to those who are new here and Correct your spelling
figure
reliance
on history books.
Replace the word
rely
Therefore
, I am approaching at
you just to advise on Change preposition
apply
make
it Change the verb form
making
according to
real perfection. I would appreciate it if you could understand my concern and accept it with a
huge respect.
I am looking forward to Remove the article
apply
hear
back from you.
Yours faithfully,
PreetChange the verb form
hearing
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Task Achievement
Consider using a more formal greeting and sign-off to suit the context of writing to an author, for example, 'Dear Sir/Madam,' and 'Sincerely, [Your Name].'
Task Achievement
Review and correct grammatical errors to improve clarity and professionalism in your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific point: incorrect information, correct information, and the importance of correction. This will improve the logical flow and make your letter easier to follow.
Task Achievement
Work on using a consistent tone throughout your letter. While it's important to point out mistakes, ensure your message is polite and respectful.
Task Achievement
You effectively communicated the main purpose of your letter, which is to inform the author of incorrect information in their book.
Task Achievement
Your initiative to provide correct information and explain why corrections are necessary demonstrates a good understanding of the task.