The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.

The bar chart gives information about the number of overseas Japanese tourists between 1985 and 1995, and the line graph illustrates percentage of those going to Australia between 1984 and 1994.
The presented bar graph and line graph depict the
number
of Japanese tourists in millions that commuted to other countries in the years between 1985 and 1995, and the percentage of those visiting Australia between 10 years
of
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the span from 1984 and 1994 respectively.
Overall
, the
number
increased every
year
except in 1991 when the
number
of tourists dropped slightly
whereas
, the
number
of Japanese tourists in Australia dropped in the years of 1989 and
then
again plummeted in
year
95.
Firstly
, the
number
of overseas visitors kept on rising till 1990 as it doubled from the very first
year
but a minimal drop was observed in the coming
year
when it hiked again to its peak in the climax
year
when the
number
was at its highest.
Secondly
, the percentage of people visiting Australia from Japan demonstrated an upward trend till 89 and went downward in the next
year
and
this
again went to its pinnacle in the
year
1993 when the percentage was around 7 and went to 6 again the
last
year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas tourists
  • chart analysis
  • data interpretation
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • tourist trends
  • economic factors
  • promotional activities
  • visa policies
  • cultural influences
  • social factors
  • culmination of trends
  • speculation
  • preference shifts
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