You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given map illustrates the improvements in the rural area of Ryemouth in
last
30 years from 1995 until Correct article usage
the last
present
day.
Add an article
the present
Overall
, major development
in the town are as follows: farmland and the forest area Fix the agreement mistake
developments
has
been replaced by Correct subject-verb agreement
have
golf
course and tennis court. In the southern end of the Add an article
the golf
a golf
area
fishing port has been removed. Add a comma
area,
However
, not many changes have been made to the housing section, and the café situated in southeast
corner.
In the southwest corner of the village, shops have been replaced by restaurants and apartments have replaced fish Add an article
the southeast
market
. Fix the agreement mistake
markets
In addition
to that, new houses have been added on each side of the road and two new houses have been developed adjacent to the enclosed community of houses.
However
, not many changes have been made to the housing section, and the café situated in southeast
corner. Add an article
the southeast
Also
, a car par
has been introduced next to the hotel, Correct your spelling
park
while
hotel
remains unchanged.Correct article usage
the hotel
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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