The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The map

illustrate

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illustrates

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the development and situation in sports courts of

university

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the university

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over 34 years.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there were relocation, construction and

removement

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movement

of buildings. In 1990, there was a park that was located in

front

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of the car park. The outdoor pool was

also

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contructed

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constructed

contracted

with several important buildings

surroung

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surround

surrounding

this

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place

such

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cafe

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a cafe

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, reception and changing room. There was a tennis court

was

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apply

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developed near

with

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apply

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the place

who

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where

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people were able to switch their clothes. Today, there are

also

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many

development

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developments

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that

excuted

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exist

in the sports courts. The pool recently

are

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not available in outdoor condition, it is relocated in

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isolated room, and

also

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equipped by cafe and reception. The changing room is no longer placed with reception together. It is replaced and built in

front

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of a new facility, namely

Fitness

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the Fitness

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Centre.

Moreover

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, the woodland in the north is

deforasted

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deforested

decorated

in order to construct a new feature,

Basketball

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a Basketball

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centre.

In addition

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, the tennis court is relocated from in

front

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pool

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the pool

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to another area, in

front

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baskeball

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basketball

centre.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words front with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

layout
facilities
diversified infrastructure
accessibility
expansion
investment
indoors fitness activities
modern health trends
transformation
commitment
sportsmanship
competitive sports culture

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