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The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The map
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the development and situation in sports courts of
university
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the university
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 over 34 years.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were relocation, construction and
removement
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movement
 of buildings. In 1990, there was a park that was located in
front
 of the car park. The outdoor pool was
also
contructed
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constructed
contracted
 with several important buildings
surroung
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surround
surrounding
this
 place
such
 as
cafe
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a cafe
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, reception and changing room. There was a tennis court
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
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developed near
with
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apply
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the place
who
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where
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 people were able to switch their clothes. Today, there are
also
 many
development
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developments
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 that
excuted
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exist
 in the sports courts. The pool recently
are
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is
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 not available in outdoor condition, it is relocated in
a
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an
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 isolated room, and
also
 equipped by cafe and reception. The changing room is no longer placed with reception together. It is replaced and built in
front
 of a new facility, namely
Fitness
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the Fitness
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 Centre.
Moreover
, the woodland in the north is
deforasted
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deforested
decorated
 in order to construct a new feature,
Basketball
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a Basketball
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 centre.
In addition
, the tennis court is relocated from in
front
 of
pool
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the pool
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 to another area, in
front
 of
baskeball
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basketball
 centre.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words front with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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