The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The map
illustrate
the development and situation in sports courts of Change the verb form
illustrates
university
over 34 years.
Add an article
the university
Overall
, it can be seen that there were relocation, construction and removement
of buildings.
In 1990, there was a park that was located in Correct your spelling
movement
front
of the car park. The outdoor pool was also
contructed
with several important buildings Correct your spelling
constructed
contracted
surroung
Correct your spelling
surround
surrounding
this
place such
as cafe
, reception and changing room. There was a tennis court Correct article usage
a cafe
was
developed near Unnecessary verb
apply
with
the place Change preposition
apply
who
people were able to switch their clothes.
Today, there are Correct word choice
where
also
many development
that Change to a plural noun
developments
excuted
in the sports courts. The pool recently Correct your spelling
exist
are
not available in outdoor condition, it is relocated in Change the verb form
is
a
isolated room, and Change the article
an
also
equipped by cafe and reception. The changing room is no longer placed with reception together. It is replaced and built in front
of a new facility, namely Fitness
Centre. Correct article usage
the Fitness
Moreover
, the woodland in the north is deforasted
in order to construct a new feature, Correct your spelling
deforested
decorated
Basketball
centre. Correct article usage
a Basketball
In addition
, the tennis court is relocated from in front
of pool
to another area, in Add an article
the pool
front
of baskeball
centre.Correct your spelling
basketball
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