The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
The three pie charts illustrate
degrees
been
granted Unnecessary verb
apply
in
Change preposition
by
National
University over a period of 20 years since 1990. The bar chart divided Correct article usage
the National
degrees
into 4 categories which are Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business. Overall
, it shows a trend of growth in Computer Science degrees
being granted, on the other hand
, Business graduates shows
a tendency of decline.
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
It is clear that
Computer Science degrees
are
gradually increased from 30% in 1990 to 45% in 2010. Unnecessary verb
apply
Whereas
, Business graduates steadily declined from 30% in 1990 to 15% in 2010.which nearly
half of what . Medicine graduates Add a missing verb
is nearly
have
a 5% increase in 2000 Wrong verb form
had
then
fall
back to Wrong verb form
fell
its
original 25% in 2010. Correct pronoun usage
their
On the contrary
, Law students lose
5% in 2000 Wrong verb form
lost
then
increased back to 15% in 2010.
In conclusion
the rates of Add a comma
conclusion,
degrees
fluctuate from 1990-2010Submitted by shirley772023 on
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