The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.

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The three pie charts illustrate

degrees

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been

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apply

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granted

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National

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the National

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University over a period of 20 years since 1990. The bar chart divided

degrees

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into 4 categories which are Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business.

Overall

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, it shows a trend of growth in Computer Science

degrees

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being granted,

on the other hand

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, Business graduates

shows

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show

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a tendency of decline.

It is clear that

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Computer Science

degrees

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are

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apply

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gradually increased from 30% in 1990 to 45% in 2010.

Whereas

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, Business graduates steadily declined from 30% in 1990 to 15% in 2010.which

nearly

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is nearly

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half of what . Medicine graduates

have

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had

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a 5% increase in 2000

then

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fall

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fell

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back to

its

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their

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original 25% in 2010.

On the contrary

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, Law students

lose

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lost

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5% in 2000

then

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increased back to 15% in 2010. In

conclusion

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conclusion,

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the rates of

degrees

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fluctuate from 1990-2010

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Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

137 words

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The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.

some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Today every large city facing traffic jam problem. what are the causes and how can it tackle

In today's very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?