the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.
The figures illustrate a comparison between now and the future of a modernized part of Norbiton town.
Overall
, it can be seen that
this
area
is planned to develop into a residential place where factories will be replaced by houses. First of all, expanding the main roads is one of the significant future plans in
this
area
. The
square
in the middle of the town will be expanded to the north with a housing
area
to its west and crossed from the river to the farmland where it will be faced with another housing part.
Also
, the west side of
this
square
will be constructed
as well as
building a small
square
in the south of industrial areas. Second of all, more people will settle here to live and the main factories which were located across the east side of the main
square
will be a residential
area
, with a school
at the end
of the east road and a playground on the west.
Furthermore
, there are more facilities,
for example
, the medical
center
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centre
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and the shops, in the south of the main
square
.
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