The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map illustrates three possible

area

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for a new shop in the town called Pellington. In general, the convenience store will be built in three spots, which are

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spots

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A, B, and C. Each of the

location

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has some distinct characteristics.

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, if the developer of the shop wants to build it in a strategic area,

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A is a better option than the others because it is located in

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a residential

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area where people are possibly attracted to come.

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, there is

park

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a park

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next to the location that might be crowded

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the weekend. The second location is B, which position is the countryside.

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contrary

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this

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spot is less accessible because it will be much harder to see a passer-by. The next pick is

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located in the countryside but the population

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there is still dense,

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it is not too far from the airport and the railway.

Overall

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, choosing spot A is more profitable for the owner.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

161 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proposed sites
supermarket
locations
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outskirts
residential areas
transport hubs
proximity
major roads
landmarks
accessibility
competition
shopping district
industrial area
green spaces
logistic ease
isolated
densely populated
traffic
customer reach
expansion possibilities
accessibility
customer base
logistical convenience
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The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Topic 2: Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of the society where such products are sold. Do you agree or disagree?

Billions of dollars are being wasted each year in space research . The money could be better used to improve conditions on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some people think that the best way to broaden young people's understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What other measures do you think might be effective?