The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009
The line graph highlights data on the
number
of foreign guests that came to the UK for various purposes from 1989 to 2009.
Overall
, the table shows different trends over a period.
While
the
number
of
visitors
for holiday purposes had the highest index, two other factors in terms of business and visiting friends and relatives experienced a slight decrease with fluctuations over the period. More than 6
million
people
flew to the UK to spend their holidays in 1989.
Then
there was gradual growth to 8
million
in 1994. Afterwards, the figure reached a peak of almost 10
million
visitors
in 1998. Meanwhile, the
number
declined sharply to 7
million
people
in 2004. By 2004, the
number
of
visitors
for holiday purposes was 9
million
. Regarding the
visitors
with business interests, the starting point of the index was 5.5
million
people
.
Then
the figure showed a gradual reduction to 4
million
people
in 1994. There was significant growth at 8
million
people
during ten-year periods from 1994 to 2004.
However
,
at the end
of the period, it had decreased to 7
million
by 2009. In terms of
visitors
coming to friends and relatives, the figure was nearly 4
million
people
in 1989, and
then
the index registered gradual growth from 5
million
to 7
million
between 1994 and 2004, respectively. Afterwards, the
number
of
visitors
went down to 6
million
people
in 2009.
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