The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.
The picture illustrates how much average carbon dioxide was released per person in the
UK
,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2006.
Overall
, There was a common drop in the number of average carbon dioxide emissions from the
UK
and
Sweden
.
On the contrary
, the data for Italy and Portugal
were seen
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gradual growth,
while
the figure for the
UK
was still the highest amount after all. The number of CO2 emissions per person in the
UK
started at over 10
tonnes
, after which it steadily went down to only over 8
tonnes
at the end
of the period.
While the
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figure for
Sweden
was over 8
tonnes
in 1967, followed by a sharp increase to over 10
tonnes
in 1977, before ending up dropping dramatically to under 6
tonnes
.
On the contrary
, only 4
tonnes
of CO2 released was seen in Italy, which over time went up to almost 8
tonnes
in 2007. the same was witnessed in Portugal, but to a smaller extent, with under 2
tonnes
at the beginning and a final was exactly at the amount in
Sweden
in 2007.
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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average per capita
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • period/stable
  • turning point
  • fluctuations
  • environmental policies
  • economic factors
  • technological advancements
  • sustainable practices
  • emission reduction targets
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy sources
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