The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how the fringes of a town, whose name is Fosbury, changed over a thirty-five-year period from 1980 to 2015.
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, Fosbury's suburbs, which were
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residential and commercial
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in 1980, experienced considerable alteration and turned into a modernized area in the next thirty-five years. The most notable improvement was the erection of a traffic circle in 2015
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the area that was allocated to a block of flats and a grocery store in 1980.
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detached dwellings and the apartment hotel remained in the same location over
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period, the row houses were enlarged and relocated to the left of the town's peripheries in 2015, where the public park was situated in 1980. On the commercial side, two parking lots have been constructed near the popular high-demand facilities.
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the significant population growth, the old tennis courts and the grocery store were respectively converted
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a sports
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and a hypermarket in the early 2000s.
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no storage building was established in 1980, many warehouses were built
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of fields in 2015.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural layout
  • open spaces
  • housing areas
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • road networks
  • commercial areas
  • economic growth
  • green spaces
  • urban expansion
  • public amenities
  • community development
  • demolished
  • renovated
  • modernization process
  • transportation infrastructure
  • landscape modification
  • environmental conservation
  • preservation
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