The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates data about 10 countries with the utmost number of citizens both in 2019 and 2100
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Overall
, in the first year mentioned, the countries which Linking Words
was
crowded most Change the verb form
were
was
China, followed by India and the United States Correct subject-verb agreement
were
subsequently
, Linking Words
however
, the experts indicate that there will be a substitution of some states.
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Firstly
, when it comes to 2019, it is undeniable that China was the country with the highest number of populations about 1.4 Linking Words
billions
people, Change to singular
billion
India
was the second at Correct word choice
and India
approximate
1.3 Change the word
approximately
billions
. Surprisingly, despite being the biggest one, only 146 Change to singular
billion
millions
Russians existed at the time. Change to singular
million
Additionally
, Mexico was the tenth around 129 Linking Words
millions
folks.
Change to singular
million
Furthermore
, there will be an Linking Words
alternating
, most academics reckon that India will become the most crowded realm with 1.5 Replace the word
alternate
billions
people Change to singular
billion
while
only 941 Linking Words
millions
crowds will live in China, Change to singular
million
besides
that, Linking Words
at
that year, Congo, Ethiopia and Tanzania will be on the list Change preposition
apply
instead
of Russia, Bangladesh and Mexico.Linking Words
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