The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first picture displays the current layout of Islip town
centre
, and the second picture illustrates some proposed changes in the future.
As can be seen, a pedestrian zone is planned to be constructed, and a new road
for vehicles is planned to frame this
area
. Additionally
, there are proposals for more modern facilities and housing.
Looking at the information in more detail on the current map, the town centre
is developed around a main road
, which stretches from west to east. There are many shops to the north and south of the road
. While
the area
to the north is mainly countryside, a large area
to the south is occupied by housing.
Moving on to the predictions, a circular road
that surrounds the city centre
attracts attention. This
road
, expected to be built, is a dual carriageway. The middle section of the main road
is projected to be pedestrianised. Shops in this
area
are planned to be demolished and replaced by a shopping centre
, a bus station, and a car park, along with
a housing area
forecasted to be introduced.Submitted by zora840810 on
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