the graph below shows the numbers of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the numbers of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the number of visitors that took a trip to a specific Caribbean island between the ages of 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the number of tourists visiting
this
place has had a moderately steady growth throughout the duration of the survey; with 1
million
at first and soaring up to 3.5
million
at the end
of the timeline. People who preferred to stay on their cruise ships have had several fluctuations in their numbers which was roughly above 0 at the beginning but managed to reach 0.5
million
visitors in 2011.
Then
it was followed by yet another downfall which led it to its starting point in 2012 and again reaching 0.5
million
a year after that.
However
, from 2013 onwards, there has been a persistent rise in numbers that led to 2
million
tourists by the year 2017.
On the other hand
, visitors that resided in the island's accommodations, have had an
overall
increase starting from 0.75 to 1.5
million
at the end
.
In contrast
, their numbers have experienced two levelling-out phases from 2010 to 2011 and 2013 to 2015, freezing at less than a
million
and 1.5
million
respectively.
In addition
, there has
also
been a minor downfall spotted in 2016.
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