The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture describes
about
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the stages of production
new
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items by using reusable products.
Overall
it can be seen that the process by which daily usable objects are produced from plastic bottles is a multistep, cyclical process, which consists
9
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parts. At first the organic and
recycle
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trashes are
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stored in a bin from homes, roadsides and any other places.
Then
collected by trucks in a week. After that, these elements are
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and grading different categories in a factory and make a compressed block.
Additionally
,
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blocks are crushed to fine and
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due to
numerous wastes and
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. After cleaning, it enters into 6th stage for making pellets. Turning to the remaining figure it illustrates that granules are heating to form raw materials and it enters into 8th places and
finally
found
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new objects
such
as containers, pens, T-shirts, shopping bags and pots.
Then
the process begins again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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