The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture describes
about
the stages of production Remove the preposition
apply
new
items by using reusable products.
Change preposition
of new
Overall
it can be seen that the process by which daily usable objects are produced from plastic bottles is a multistep, cyclical process, which consists 9
parts.
At first the organic and Change preposition
of 9
recycle
Wrong verb form
recycled
trashes are
stored in a bin from homes, roadsides and any other places. Correct subject-verb agreement
trash is
Then
collected by trucks in a week. After that, these elements are sorting
and grading different categories in a factory and make a compressed block. Wrong verb form
sorted
Additionally
, this
blocks are crushed to fine and Change the determiner
these
washing
Wrong verb form
washed
due to
numerous wastes and dusts
. After cleaning, it enters into 6th stage for making pellets.
Turning to the remaining figure it illustrates that granules are heating to form raw materials and it enters into 8th places and Change the wording
dust
specks of dust
clouds of dust
bags of dust
finally
found
new objects Wrong verb form
finds
such
as containers, pens, T-shirts, shopping bags and pots. Then
the process begins again.Submitted by Aafuankazinatoshi on
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