The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture describes

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the stages of production

new

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items by using reusable products.

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it can be seen that the process by which daily usable objects are produced from plastic bottles is a multistep, cyclical process, which consists

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parts. At first the organic and

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trashes are

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stored in a bin from homes, roadsides and any other places.

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collected by trucks in a week. After that, these elements are

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and grading different categories in a factory and make a compressed block.

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this

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blocks are crushed to fine and

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numerous wastes and

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. After cleaning, it enters into 6th stage for making pellets. Turning to the remaining figure it illustrates that granules are heating to form raw materials and it enters into 8th places and

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found

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new objects

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as containers, pens, T-shirts, shopping bags and pots.

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the process begins again.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Recycling process
Disposal
Collection
Sorting
Cleaning
Contaminants
Recycling center
Plastic flakes
Melting
Re-shaping
Raw materials
Transformation
Repurposing
End products
Variety
Sustainability

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