The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetatian diet.

The line graph provides information about the proportion of UK teenagers following a vegetarian diet between 1960 - 2020 in the UK.

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, what stands out from the line graph is that the percentage of young people who ate a vegetable diet in 1980 was the highest.

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around 1990 to 2000 were the lowest from

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period.

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the first data collected in 1960, the starting point increased dramatically to 15% in 1980 which was the peak of the graph. After that, the percentage fell significantly to just over 5% in 1990.

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, the proportion of young citizens who liked eating plants to lose weight from 1990 to 2000 fluctuated between 5% - 10%.

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, in 2000 had a moderate increase from 5% to 10% in 2010.

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, the percentage of adolescents who consumed a plant diet from 2010 to 2020 remained stable at 10% for 10 years.

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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetatian diet.

Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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