The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and Sea World from 2001-2005. The bar chart shows the most popular rides and attactions in Disneyland
The graph shows the rides of
Disneyland
and Sea world
from the past few years, the y-axis Correct your spelling
SeaWorld
depict
the number of Correct subject-verb agreement
depicts
the
visitors and the x-axis shows the past few years.
By observing Correct article usage
apply
the
both graphs Remove the article
apply
i
can say that Change the capitalization
I
Disneyland
is more popular than Sea world
because they both start at the same stats and number of Correct your spelling
SeaWorld
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the visitor
visitor
but till 2005 Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
Disneyland
witnessed an extreme increasing in the number of visitors starting from 2003 unlike
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, unlike
Sea world
which rose slightly.
In Correct your spelling
SeaWorld
conclude
, depending on the graph's stats Replace the word
conclusion
i
can say that most Change the capitalization
I
of
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apply
people
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the people
preffer
the rides and Correct your spelling
prefer
attactions
in Correct your spelling
attractions
Disneyland
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